Her storm gathered strength
Brewing between head and heart
Her mind, a flywheel of thoughts
Spinning relentlessly
Energy wasted on the rain
And the flash floods of her life
~
She could feel her sun beating
Teasing her reckless thunder
Warming the zephyrs of her past
Taming the tempest
She surrendered to the blue sky
And gathered her fallen branches
~
At Dverse Poet’s Pub, Claudia challenged us to use bold images and metaphors to create a strong visual impression in our work.
Oh, this tempest sounds quite familiar. Lovely write.
Thank you. 🙂
Just wonderful, mishunderstood 🙂
Thanks so much, Sharon. 🙂
Fabulous, Mish!
Thank you, Melanie!! 🙂
Very apt, lovely metaphor.
Thank you. 🙂
aww…what else she could do…beautifully expressed..
I appreciate your comments, Sumana. 🙂
Beautiful!
Thanks! 🙂
Thanks for stopping by page. I love your poem too, as you used your metaphors very well.
Thank you! 🙂
You are welcome!
Wonderful, exciting images, beautifully written. ~ Dennis
Thank you!! 🙂