Oasis

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I fell in love with silence
under the hush of snowfall
and you
under the blaze of desert skies
traded green for earth-tones
turquoise lakes for turquoise stones
we’ve sailed in waters, unruffled
and tumbled in the dust bowl
still
you are my oasis

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  1. I love the imagery of sea and dessert being so much the same… lovely ending

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  2. love waits in the wings, and sometimes it settles in. like how you combined nature’s terrain with love’s terrain

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  3. I love the contrast between the ‘hush of snowfall’ and the ‘blaze of desert skies’, and the vivid colours, Mish.

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  4. the contrasts here are great

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  5. The last lines says it all for me. I think I shall share that line with my husband of 54 years….beautiful line.

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  6. The contrasting images make the poem. And, oh, those final two lines!

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  7. I like it for all the reasons stated above. The line, “turquoise lakes for turquoise stones” is a bit imaginative, I can’t imagine either as being “turquoise”. Rocks do look prettier under the water, I ‘rustled’ a rock from a lake in xxxx thinking it might be a huge Turquoise gemstone but I got it home it wasn’t pretty at all. Polishing would bring out what I saw in the lake.

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  8. Nice comparisons/ contrasts.

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  9. I too like the contrasts in this piece. Nicely done.

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  10. A beautiful love story!

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  11. Very nicely done, Mish.

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  12. This speaks to me of the gift of sharing time with someone you love. This love leads to adventures and considerations you would never experience without this person. Wonderful.

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  13. wow!!! Whats not to luv in this poem. Bravo.

    Thanks for dropping by my blog

    much♡love

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  14. Beautiful, Mish. Just love it.

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  15. Such gorgeous colors – and comfort – here, Mish. And thanks for the inspiration.

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  16. The loveliest “quadrille love song” ever!!!! Thank you for a blazing fine challenge.

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  17. Hi Mish, I love the idea of the desert and the ocean. Parts of my country are just like that.

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  18. A tender love poem, Mish. Beautiful.

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  19. Oh my goodness… this is so sweet!!

    How lovely!!

    ~David

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  20. What a beautiful last line that ties the whole poem together! Well written, Mish 🙂

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  21. Wonderful contrast here, Mish. Beautiful poem!

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  22. This is lovely – both the sentiment and the way you have expressed it.

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