Shifty

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what a dramatic conclusion
winter bursting into tears
like some last minute production
bewildered red-bellied woodpecker
ponders your intention
I ponder your intention
shamelessly rubbing shoulders
with spring
your cocky grin
sharpened at one corner
I don’t trust you
always been a flakey one


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  1. What a fantastic line:
    “winter bursting into tears”

    LOVE.

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  2. Delightful!

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  3. I love your poem, Mish. Red Bellied Woodpeckers are wonderful to see.

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  4. I like the woodpeckers, we had one that came every year where we used to live. Now have different bird kinds here 75 miles closer to the Gulf of Mexico.
    ..

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  5. Great reference to the woodpecker. I have a Pileated Woodpecker around here drilling holes in all the trees. It is very loud. I think winter and spring are definitely rubbing shoulders.

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  6. We’re still waiting for woodpeckers to return – they really like our silver birch – so your poem filled the space, and what a great phrase, Mish: ‘winter bursting into tears’! And I love the ‘cocky grin sharpened at one corner’.

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  7. Well, first, this is a wonderful evocation of the off-and-on approach to spring, and second, I want that bird feeder!

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  8. Spring has many false coming… shifty indeed.

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  9. Luv the impersonification.

    Much♡love

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  10. shamelessly rubbing shoulders
    with spring
    your cocky grin
    sharpened at one corner
    I don’t trust you
    always been a flakey one

    This is somewhere far beyond clever, Mish. I love it!


    David

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  11. Mish, so many great lines and such fantastic personification! Love it. ❤️

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  12. I don’t trust you – great riposte to the bursting into tears – flaky indeed.

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