Now is the season of feuille morte
In a dark corner I sit amongst dying yarrow
The bruises to my psyche sear and scourge
And when the embers fade to dust
Conflicting thoughts smoulder still
Inside I hide those unpretentious dreams
Only to pop them one by one
Perhaps now we can turn to love
A persistent glint on the horizon
Take me in your arms, I am yours
When pain bandages my mouth dumb
Gift me beauty of words
Set in free verse
We stare into darkness for light we have lost
But what I feel is that
My light springs from yours, as sun illumines moon
For dVerse Poets Pub. Melissa is our host and has given us 2 options to approach Poetics today. One is to write a “cento” taking lines from a selection of dVersian poetry from the month of April. Note: “A cento is a poem formed from lines of poems written by other poets. Latin for ‘patchwork,’ the cento is composed like a collage or quilt, and honors others’ poems while presenting a unique work.” (www.poetryfoundation.org). I mistakenly ventured off the selected prompt list but all are from April.
In order, here are the lines I borrowed to create my cento.
- Acting My Age In Autumn- Laura Bloomsbury
- Lonely (a quadrille) – Punam
- Her Page – Melissa Lemay
- Hot as Blazes – Judy Dykstra Brown
- Composure for, : Folly in Innocence – David Bogomolny
- My Box – Colleen Cheesebro
- A Poem and it’s Palenode- Lillian
- Perhaps Now – Paul Vincent Cann
- Mareel – Kim M. Russell
- Pantoum of the Tango– Helen
- Poetry is a Thousand Psalms, Not One – Dorahak
- Prayer to the Muse – Michelle Beauchamp (me)
- The Unboxing – Jane Swanson
- Finding our way back – Bjorn Rudberg
- How beauty is perceived- Sanaa Rizvi
- Your Faithful Hound – Li/Lisa
Image by Mystic Art Design from Pixabay
Lots of work putting a poem like this together. Well done.
Thank you! 🙂
I am so happy with the responses to this prompt! I have not ceased being amazed. This is wonderful, Mish. I read through it a few times and I absolutely love the way you’ve strung the lines together. I get a sense of a bigger mystery, and hopefulness.
Thank you so much, Melissa…and for the second read. I thoroughly enjoyed your prompt and pieced together another cento for OLN. 😊
I’m so honored! Thank you, Mish. 💖 This is a stunning form. I love how the lines from other poems resonnate so well together. Bravo to you!
Your line worked so well in what I was trying to convey. Thanks, Colleen.
This is beautifully done, Mish. 🙂
Thank you! 🙂
This is such a gorgeous cento, Mish! I love the darkness that runs through it, highlighted by glints of light. I especially love the combinations of lines in:
‘And when the embers fade to dust
Conflicting thoughts smoulder still’
and
‘We stare into darkness for light we have lost
But what I feel is that
My light springs from yours, as sun illumines moon’.
A lovely comment, Kim. Thanks so much!
My pleasure, Mish!
You may have strayed just a little …. however you created a smashing cento! Thanks so much for finding one of my lines**
It was my pleasure, Helen!
I am so honored! Thank you, Mish! 😍 This is an exquisitely woven cento! ❤️❤️
Sanaa, I know you have very exquisite lines but this one was just what I needed. 🙂
Love what you did not the least how you managed to turn my darkness into light.
A wonderful gift of a line. I knew right away I would use it. Thanks, Bjorn.
Mish, you’ve meticulously constructed a stunning poem. Happy one of my lines helped. I also echo Bjorn in morphing darkness to light ❤
Aww, thank you so much, Lisa.. and yours was a lovely line to end with!
❤
Centos are hard work. You’ve done an exceptional job.
They really are! Thanks, Debi.
This is an amazing Cento, the lines work together seamlessly into a lovely poem.
Thank you so much 🙂
That worked out very well for you. Lots of work finding the ones you used too. BTW, we’ve been retired 25 ( Mrs. Jim) and 23 (myself) years and have fairly well finished our desire to travel. We have visited at least 82 countries. My list, https://jimmiehov3.blogspot.com/2021/08/countries-where-i-have-been-78-of-them.html?showComment=1716438967251 .
Aha! Then there is much appreciation for travel. Wow😊 Thanks for dropping by my blog… and Canada.
it reads like an original – so well meshed (and thank you for choosing that line as opener!)
Laura, it is a very special line. Thanks for your kind words.
So gorgeously wrought, Mish, it’s seamless in its flow, the theme centered and reaching its delightful, tender close. Thanks so much for choosing a line from one of mine.
Thank you, Dora. It was a pleasure to use your line.
Love how you have crafted this, Mish, moving from darkness to light. Thanks so much for including a line from my poem.❤️