When the Embers Fade (a Cento)

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Now is the season of feuille morte
In a dark corner I sit amongst dying yarrow
The bruises to my psyche sear and scourge
And when the embers fade to dust
Conflicting thoughts smoulder still
Inside I hide those unpretentious dreams
Only to pop them one by one

Perhaps now we can turn to love
A persistent glint on the horizon
Take me in your arms, I am yours
When pain bandages my mouth dumb
Gift me beauty of words
Set in free verse

We stare into darkness for light we have lost
But what I feel is that
My light springs from yours, as sun illumines moon

  1. Acting My Age In Autumn- Laura Bloomsbury
  2. Lonely (a quadrille)Punam
  3. Her PageMelissa Lemay
  4. Hot as Blazes – Judy Dykstra Brown
  5. Composure for, : Folly in Innocence – David Bogomolny
  6. My Box – Colleen Cheesebro
  7. A Poem and it’s Palenode- Lillian
  8. Perhaps Now – Paul Vincent Cann
  9. Mareel – Kim M. Russell
  10. Pantoum of the TangoHelen
  11. Poetry is a Thousand Psalms, Not One – Dorahak
  12. Prayer to the Muse – Michelle Beauchamp (me)
  13. The Unboxing – Jane Swanson
  14. Finding our way back – Bjorn Rudberg
  15. How beauty is perceived- Sanaa Rizvi
  16. Your Faithful Hound – Li/Lisa

31 responses »

  1. Lots of work putting a poem like this together. Well done.

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  2. I am so happy with the responses to this prompt! I have not ceased being amazed. This is wonderful, Mish. I read through it a few times and I absolutely love the way you’ve strung the lines together. I get a sense of a bigger mystery, and hopefulness.

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    • Thank you so much, Melissa…and for the second read. I thoroughly enjoyed your prompt and pieced together another cento for OLN. 😊

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  3. I’m so honored! Thank you, Mish. 💖 This is a stunning form. I love how the lines from other poems resonnate so well together. Bravo to you!

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  4. This is beautifully done, Mish. 🙂

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  5. This is such a gorgeous cento, Mish! I love the darkness that runs through it, highlighted by glints of light. I especially love the combinations of lines in:

    ‘And when the embers fade to dust
    Conflicting thoughts smoulder still’

    and

    ‘We stare into darkness for light we have lost
    But what I feel is that
    My light springs from yours, as sun illumines moon’.

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  6. You may have strayed just a little …. however you created a smashing cento! Thanks so much for finding one of my lines**

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  7. I am so honored! Thank you, Mish! 😍 This is an exquisitely woven cento! ❤️❤️

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  8. Love what you did not the least how you managed to turn my darkness into light.

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  9. Mish, you’ve meticulously constructed a stunning poem. Happy one of my lines helped. I also echo Bjorn in morphing darkness to light ❤

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  10. Centos are hard work. You’ve done an exceptional job.

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  11. This is an amazing Cento, the lines work together seamlessly into a lovely poem.

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  12. That worked out very well for you. Lots of work finding the ones you used too. BTW, we’ve been retired 25 ( Mrs. Jim) and 23 (myself) years and have fairly well finished our desire to travel. We have visited at least 82 countries. My list, https://jimmiehov3.blogspot.com/2021/08/countries-where-i-have-been-78-of-them.html?showComment=1716438967251 .

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  13. it reads like an original – so well meshed (and thank you for choosing that line as opener!)

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  14. So gorgeously wrought, Mish, it’s seamless in its flow, the theme centered and reaching its delightful, tender close. Thanks so much for choosing a line from one of mine.

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  15. Love how you have crafted this, Mish, moving from darkness to light. Thanks so much for including a line from my poem.❤️

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