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Dormiveglia

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What is this wasteland, this dormiveglia

where slumber sleeps and wakefulness burbles?

I am aliferous, floating like the floss of milkweed

caught between comatose clouds and

the warm rush of kindled crosswinds

colours? they don’t exist here

only the phosphenes as I rub my eyes

but I remember the feuillimort of autumn

and subtle scents of solandis

arms flailing, I sail sideways, longing to

fall into the open arms of consciousness

while sandman waves from above

here, under wayward stars, I wait

to nestle in quilts of haimish reveries or

wake to the gleaming edges of reality

Written for Poetics at dVerse Poets Pub – “There’s a Word for That

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  1. Oh this is wonderful! I read it a second time, aloud. The sounds with all the alliteration etc….just really a delight. And the image is perfect!
    PS: I really enjoyed this prompt!

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  2. This is just wonderful, Mish, you’ve incorporated so many of the words! And isn’t dormiveglia a fantastic one? I love the sibilance of ‘slumber sleeps’ and the idea that ‘wakefulness burbles’.

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  3. This is an amazing response Mish. Love the floating milkweed, sandman waving from above, haimish reveries – this describes the title so creatively.

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  4. You’ve given us a beautiful example of how to use these fantastic words. It was hard to choose which ones to use!

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  5. Glenn A. Buttkus

    A sterling illustration for the prompt, and a lovely poem standing alone. Words this unique almost feel like nonsense words, and at first they fit clumsily into the lines, but then with a slight adjustment, accepting their validity, the fun begins.

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  6. Dreamlike, but the last line is my favourite.

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  7. Fun image to set the tone, Mish. Highly seasoned and very tasty night-snacking dish for us logolepsics.

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  8. Nice one. The prompt words flowed so smoothly into your poem

    Much💛love

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  9. Nice usage, Mish. Thank you, I always enjoy reading the prompter’s write on her/his prompt. This one was fun, I cheated a bit, just one of the words I used was new to me. There were a lot more I didn’t know, and for sure I haven’t memorized more than that one, “susurrus”. I will go back now to read again the definition of your “dormiveglia” there.
    ..

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  10. This was excellent Mish, excellent! Even without the definitions fully committed to memory, I was able to sail through your piece understanding its gist. Thisvwas wonderful writing my friend. 👍🏼🙂✌🏼❤️

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  11. Love this! The last stanza in particular. A very good prompt for new word usage and one that was very enjoyable!

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  12. Having this unusual and melodious words really captures that in-between state well. (K)

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    • Thanks….I was very drawn to the definition of dormiveglia, taking it a bit further with being “stuck” in that state of mind. Thanks for reading. 🙂

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  13. I was a bit intrigued with dormiveglia also and the image. Insomnia can put you there quite frequently. I loved especially the gleaming edges of reality.

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  14. I so love your title and the opening: “What is this wasteland, this dormiveglia
    where slumber sleeps and wakefulness burbles?” It just grabs you in its exploration. So lovely, Mish. Thanks. Xoxo

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  15. Such a lovely write, Mish, especially the opening lines are stellar! In fact, the entire poem is gorgeous.
    Thanks so much for such a creative prompt.

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