when I hear thunder
I remember the end
of what we knew, the day that
polished pearl of a moon told us ALL
there is to understand while
every tree spoke at once and
there you were trying to silence them
with your arms flailing like a madman
thinking the earth spoke your
language as clouds rolled in laughter
because we all (should) know that
universal truth cannot be heard with
deaf ears and so many
tongues a twisted, so then
we sifted through the ruins
of you and me
searching for truths
that had buried themselves alive
but I’ve never once forgotten
that day or the decay
and the way it ended
and
started again
and ended
For Amaya’s prompt, “MTB: The Death Sentence” over at dVerse Poets Pub.
A very unique and challenging prompt.
A challenging prompt indeed, and you nailed it!
Thank you so much, Kim!
Good point: “universal truth cannot be heard with
deaf ears”
I believe it to be true….so many with selected hearing.
This sounds like the catastrophic end to an epic love story and these lines are what especially stick with me:
“we sifted through the ruins
of you and me
searching for truths
that had buried themselves alive”
Even the moon and the trees and all of the natural world tremble when the future is so uncertain.
Yes, they do. Thank you, Amaya.
I love this, Mish. I can hear and feel the chaos in it.
Thank you! 🙂
the personal level is really where civilization start or end, I really sensed that in Toni’s and Amaya’s poem as well. This is stunning and heartbreaking, universes colliding and spinning off in there seperate trajectories. lovely and powerful poem Mish
Thank you, Lona. I appreciate your thoughtful comment. 🙂
I love how you dressed your poem in thunderheads and took it from there… truth cannot be heard with deaf ears … truth indeed, but maybe it’s the thunder that is deafening.
Good point, Bjorn. We are distracted from the truth sometimes.
“we sifted through the ruins
of you and me
searching for truths”- LOVE!
You just wow me!
Aww thanks, you are too sweet. I thought it was the strangest thing I ever wrote!