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I remember swaying to the cricket beat

As midnight moon spilled her light

Grass-tickled, pickled with dreams

Free falling into the raven-black night

 

Dreams fizzle and fade like stone-grey tides

I am still star-stunned, staring at the skies

And as I embrace this velvety void

My heart will still dance with the fireflies

 

 

“Darkness came, full of moths and beetles. I was oppressed by the velvety emptiness of the word and swathes of soft grass. Then the fumes of the night put me to sleep”

– As I walked out one Midsummer morning –

Laurie Lee

 

A late response to Laura Bloomsbury’s Poetic prompt,

” Literary Alchemy with Laurie Lee”.

I am pleased to be your host for Open Link Night at dVerse Poets Pub.

Share one poem and indulge in the wonderful work of other poets.

 

 

 

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15 responses »

  1. Oh this poem is wonderful. Star-stunned. I do like that phrase. This is a beautiful poem Mish.

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  2. Hello Mish lovely poem so happy to see you here 💜🙋🏼‍♀️

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  3. Love the nighttime imagery in this!

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  4. This is lovely. Not calm and placid so much as energetic, full of purpose, like those fireflies whirling.

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  5. goes to show that Poetics sometimes leaves the best til last – lovely lyrical piece and very memorable are your lines “pickled with dreams”

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    • and the popping alliterations alternated with the rhymes too, pickled tickled…
      still star-stunned, staring… many other examples in this lovely piece, I agree with Jane, the sounds move this up and forward, energetically and beautifully. So well done Mish!

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  6. Wowww!! ❤️ This is utterly gorgeous in its phrasing and use of imagery, Mish 😀 I especially love; “star-stunned, staring at the skies.”

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  7. Beautiful response Mish. I specially love that last line: My heart will still dance with the fireflies.
    Enjoy your summer and thanks for hosting.

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  8. Love your enchanted approach in this poem, Mish.

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  9. Thanks for sharing this fine piece! Excellent write. Beautiful, and I love the image! See you in a couple weeks Mish. In honor of Solli Raphael: A Smidgen of Thought

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  10. Really love the way you took this… sometime I wish for nights like that… our nights are so short and never really dark…

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  11. This poem is infused with the essence of summer, Mish! It’s so full of night-time sounds, such as ‘grass-tickled’, ‘pickled’ and ‘fizzled’, and I love how you described that feeling of ‘Free falling into the raven-black night’.

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