Fusion

Posted on July 5, 2017 by Mish

I am of you and you of me

Mingled blues upon the sea

Gentle sway of burnished brine

We fall and rise in tide, in time

Gentle sway of burnished brine

Mingled blues upon the sea

I am of you and you of me

Nan Mykel | July 5, 2017 at 4:11 am

Wow! I’m unfamiliar with the form. And it’s so soothing.
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- Mish | July 5, 2017 at 4:17 am
  
  I am not sure either, Nan. It does not seem to fit the “reverse poetry” form. I wrote the first stanza and it simply directed me to go backwards…like waves.
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Buddah Moskowitz | July 12, 2017 at 8:22 pm

Loved the structure and feel of this. Very smart and wise too.
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- Mish | July 17, 2017 at 4:05 am
  
  Thank you so much!
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mother wintermoon | August 13, 2017 at 2:39 am

Beautiful, Mish! So calming to the heart and soul. I felt the gentle tide of peace and harmony flowing through. Good tidings! 😉 It’s nice to read your words again. XO
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