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I am of you and you of me

Mingled blues upon the sea

Gentle sway of burnished brine

We fall and rise in tide, in time

 

We fall and rise in tide, in time

Gentle sway of burnished brine

Mingled blues upon the sea

I am of you and you of me

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4 responses »

  1. Wow! I’m unfamiliar with the form. And it’s so soothing.

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    • I am not sure either, Nan. It does not seem to fit the “reverse poetry” form. I wrote the first stanza and it simply directed me to go backwards…like waves.

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  2. Loved the structure and feel of this. Very smart and wise too.

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