I am of you and you of me
Mingled blues upon the sea
Gentle sway of burnished brine
We fall and rise in tide, in time
We fall and rise in tide, in time
Gentle sway of burnished brine
Mingled blues upon the sea
I am of you and you of me
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Wow! I’m unfamiliar with the form. And it’s so soothing.
I am not sure either, Nan. It does not seem to fit the “reverse poetry” form. I wrote the first stanza and it simply directed me to go backwards…like waves.
Loved the structure and feel of this. Very smart and wise too.
Thank you so much!