B r e e z e on by me
Take your tail spin
For a whirlwind
I am marsh mellowed
Sun ripened
Rooted with the reeds
You are dragon winged
Mud flinging
Bumbling with the bees
I’m a water lily lulled
Cattail nap
You got that?
I am breezy
It’s our 10th Quadrille Monday over at dVerse. Get in on the 44 word fun! Bjorn chose the word “breeze”.
mishunderstood 
Love love LOVE.
Especially:
“You are dragon winged
Mud flinging
Bumbling with the bees”
I love the images of nature and the alliterative bliss.
Thanks Björn. I think nature is a great tool for expression and I will definitely take “alliteration bliss” as a compliment. 🙂
Oh this brought me home, to a life in the country side… Nicely done! 🙂
Thank you, maria. 🙂
You’re welcome! 🙂
I am sunripened you are dragon winged.. what fabulous images!
This is a wonderful ‘Iam / you are’ poem! I especially enjoy ‘marsh mellowed’ 🙂
LOVE this! So many images related to the wind — the breeze. I’m taken way way back to my Iowa days and walking down our dirt road with our daughter as an 18 month old on my back, looking at the cat tails in the ditch, bursting from the months of summer, with their seeds and filaments flying about. Thanks for the memories! 🙂
Thank you Lillian…sounds like a very precious memory with your daughter. 🙂
Great fun. Kept me smiling from start to end.
Aww, thanks Misky. 🙂
How delightful Mish ~ I specially love:
You are dragon winged
I’m a water lily lulled
🙂
Such fun! Easy breezy 🙂
Wonderful worded fun!
You got that?
I am breezy
Yes don’t anybody forget it!
Hank
WilLow breezE
liGht air whole..
Summer’s liGht
BriGht
liGhtS
iN tONE
oF TaN..
meSh toGeThEr
LoveEiN Fire Air..
Earth Wind Water
ONE OCEAN
FIELD
hOlds..:)
I always appreciate your creative responses, katie.:)
sMiLes.. My Friend..
Thanks and you
Are welcome..:)
Oh, this is great, Mish. Strong use of contrast. Finally got a quadrille up:
Thank you, Victoria…heading over to read yours now.
No worries on your timing as I’m still commenting on the last third of them…perhaps there will be more. 🙂
Love all the plants and the energy here!
Lovely fun word-play!
This poem is pure joy from root to tip of cat-tail! I’m guessing that this one was fun to write! (it was certainly fun to read!!)
How did you get so good?
What wonderful images! Such clever use of the language.