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sunset

Sun

Gushes

Spills secrets

On cloud canvass

Shades of clementine

Zig- zags of lemon zest

 Layers of cinnamon swirls

Cosmic candlelight dims on cue

Speckles of honey ginger sky gloss

Night covers day in tangerine kisses

~

For “Meeting the Bar”, Victoria reintroduced the etheree, a form of poetry that ascends from one to ten syllables or words.  A reversed etheree would read from ten to one. These can be alternated and stacked to create a geometrical poem. Drop in and check out more of them at dVerse.

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16 responses »

  1. Love this! Great thoughts to a beautiful photo!

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  2. Gorgeous photo and words gushing of cinnamon and honey ginger sky ~ Lovey form Mish and wishing a wonderful long weekend ~

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  3. Such beautiful imagery, Mish! I especially like “cinnamon swirls” and “tangerine kisses.”

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  4. The flavors, the scents, the colors…splendid.

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  5. Love the way you paint such a fiery sunset!

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  6. Connecting foods to the sunset is brilliant! Painting the sky with a pantry palette! I’m a foodie, so you completely held my attention 🙂

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  7. YES, Mish! A superb word rendering of an idyllic scene!

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  8. Oh I love those colors, the scented scenery.

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  9. My internet connection is so slow today that it didn’t load the photo -no matter, the imagery in the words were sufficient to conjure the sunset. Really beautiful.

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  10. Sigh… love the image of sun spilling secrets on clouds as paint on a canvass 😀
    Beautifully penned (as always) ❤

    Lots of love,
    Sanaa

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  11. Glenn Buttkus

    Paced wit sensuality, this fine etheree is excellent; a pleasure to share.

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  12. Dreamy words, tis indeed beautifully penned.
    Anna :o]

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  13. This is vivid, bold, and beautiful. At first, it read like a blazing sunrise, but then as I read further, I realized that it was a blazing sunset.

    “Sun

    Gushes

    Spills secrets

    On cloud canvass”

    Loved those lines. The whole poem warmed me.

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  14. Art oF Sunset
    BEaches.. Nature’s
    painTinG iN BliSSinGs
    SonG oF ColoRed Hues
    dReams of pInk Summer
    sAnds reflection iN cotton
    candy
    above
    so below..:)

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  15. The sunset has never tasted so good! Delicious description!

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