Sun
Gushes
Spills secrets
On cloud canvass
Shades of clementine
Zig- zags of lemon zest
Layers of cinnamon swirls
Cosmic candlelight dims on cue
Speckles of honey ginger sky gloss
Night covers day in tangerine kisses
~
For “Meeting the Bar”, Victoria reintroduced the etheree, a form of poetry that ascends from one to ten syllables or words. A reversed etheree would read from ten to one. These can be alternated and stacked to create a geometrical poem. Drop in and check out more of them at dVerse.
mishunderstood 
Love this! Great thoughts to a beautiful photo!
Gorgeous photo and words gushing of cinnamon and honey ginger sky ~ Lovey form Mish and wishing a wonderful long weekend ~
Such beautiful imagery, Mish! I especially like “cinnamon swirls” and “tangerine kisses.”
The flavors, the scents, the colors…splendid.
Love the way you paint such a fiery sunset!
Connecting foods to the sunset is brilliant! Painting the sky with a pantry palette! I’m a foodie, so you completely held my attention 🙂
YES, Mish! A superb word rendering of an idyllic scene!
Oh I love those colors, the scented scenery.
My internet connection is so slow today that it didn’t load the photo -no matter, the imagery in the words were sufficient to conjure the sunset. Really beautiful.
Sigh… love the image of sun spilling secrets on clouds as paint on a canvass 😀
Beautifully penned (as always) ❤
Lots of love,
Sanaa
Paced wit sensuality, this fine etheree is excellent; a pleasure to share.
Dreamy words, tis indeed beautifully penned.
Anna :o]
This is vivid, bold, and beautiful. At first, it read like a blazing sunrise, but then as I read further, I realized that it was a blazing sunset.
“Sun
Gushes
Spills secrets
On cloud canvass”
Loved those lines. The whole poem warmed me.
Art oF Sunset
BEaches.. Nature’s
painTinG iN BliSSinGs
SonG oF ColoRed Hues
dReams of pInk Summer
sAnds reflection iN cotton
candy
above
so below..:)
The sunset has never tasted so good! Delicious description!
Oh, that last line! 🙂