I lie in layers
Of lost and found
Dulling twinkles
Ups and downs
A back float babble
To clouds aloof
I am sun striped
Mis-typed ribbons
Caught between waves
Of dim and dimmer
But I shimmer
Against my own
Little piece of the sun
A quadrille written for dVerse.
mishunderstood 
I love the double meaning that can be found here:
“I lie in layers”
And this is just gorgeous:
“I am sun striped
Mis-typed ribbons
Caught between waves”
Love the uplifting ending Mish ~ Shimmer through all the up and downs, like a piece of the sun ~
I like this. Such imagery came to mind with your choice of words. Lovely.
Oh, I wish I were back-floating right now. This relaxed me after another hectic day (in a crazy week) Shimmer on!
I think this is a brilliant piece, makes me want to sit and enjoy the fading light.
Lovely!
Somehow I feel like I lean back and let a hectic day wane in my limbs… a wonderful use.