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I lie in layers

Of lost and found

Dulling twinkles

Ups and downs

A back float babble

To clouds aloof

 

I am sun striped

Mis-typed ribbons

Caught between waves

Of dim and dimmer

But I shimmer

Against my own

Little piece of the sun

 

A quadrille written for dVerse.

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7 responses »

  1. I love the double meaning that can be found here:
    “I lie in layers”
    And this is just gorgeous:
    “I am sun striped

    Mis-typed ribbons

    Caught between waves”

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  2. Love the uplifting ending Mish ~ Shimmer through all the up and downs, like a piece of the sun ~

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  3. I like this. Such imagery came to mind with your choice of words. Lovely.

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  4. Oh, I wish I were back-floating right now. This relaxed me after another hectic day (in a crazy week) Shimmer on!

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  5. I think this is a brilliant piece, makes me want to sit and enjoy the fading light.

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  6. Somehow I feel like I lean back and let a hectic day wane in my limbs… a wonderful use.

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