Writing 201 – Day 4

No ideal life can be attained

The sun will shine above the rain

Let’s not be critical

Flaws are mystical

Perfection can be mundane

impossiblebebong | October 12, 2015 at 6:10 pm

Beautiful poem and image of lavatera
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Victoria C. Slotto | October 17, 2015 at 1:25 pm

The photo is splendid–and the truth in the poem seems to take a lifetime to learn.
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- mishunderstood | October 18, 2015 at 3:45 am
  
  Thanks, Victoria. 🙂
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Glenn Buttkus | October 18, 2015 at 1:21 am

I thought for a moment that your limerick was a fancy tanka; it works well, even without the levity used in most limericks. I like the line /flaws are mystical/; damn rights.
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mishunderstood | October 18, 2015 at 4:02 am

Thanks, Glenn….and you are right, it is definitely missing the typical humour of a limerick.
If you get a chance, I would love to get your opinion for the poem that I linked up for OLN.

https://mishunderstood.wordpress.com/2015/10/06/writing-201-day-2/
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Wordifull Melanie | October 21, 2015 at 9:32 am

🙂 Perfection is overrated!
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