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Niagara Falls

 

Starting, stopping,

Perimeter flopping

I wait for your signal

To know if I’ve crossed

The line

 

Aching, breaking

Sift without shaking

You hide all the rules

For tippy toe fools

To find

 

Gushing, hushing

Egg shells crushing

Words on a wire

Dance over the fire

So blind

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6 responses »

  1. You hide all the rules

    For tippy toe fools

    To find…. great line!

    Reply
  2. To be in a suspended state of uncertainty is always hard. I love the way you have created this piece. Lovely powerful imagery too.

    Reply
  3. Thanks so much. I really appreciate your comments. 🙂

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  4. mishundersdtood, you’ve really created the atmosphere of doubt and uncertainty here,
    this is really well written. and i agree with Melanie;

    You hide all the rules
    For tippy toe fools
    To find

    this is my favorite passage as well.

    Reply
  5. Thank you, that means a lot as I admire your writing. 🙂

    Reply

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