On the surface
Embellishments adorn you
Reflecting on your own reflection
Bouncing rays of admiration
Throwing out shiny lures
To feed the braggadocio
But I see through you, my friend
You are pitted
Character is simulated
Substance has been excavated
All that matters, taken
All that remains, meaningless
You are hollow
A bitter sweet expression. Very effective.
Thanks, belsbror. 🙂
We definitely were on the same wave length. Your poem is descriptive. I feel the emptiness and chill.
Love! Love! Love!
Aww…thanks so much! 🙂
Very well done!