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Space without substance

Time without tolerance

Minds apart

Stabs in the heart

Form without motion

Endless erosion

Words unheard

Intentions deferred

Reach without touching

Nudge without crushing

Anger intact

Missing the facts

Love without action

Emotions in traction

Nothing but air

Hope and a prayer

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  1. This is really a lovely image and poem. πŸ™‚

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  2. love that last line and the photo you chose.

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  3. Wonderful and accurate depictions! Good job!

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  4. To find beauty to pour into the void is to believe more in beauty than emptiness… there is no emptiness that an appetite for beauty can’t satisfy.

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  5. That caught me at the heartstrings! Funny how poetry is so much like a painting, left to interpretation often according to our own worldview and life experiences. “Reach without touching Nudge without crushing” such a an empty relationship is what I saw. Very poignant!! Blessings, Oliana

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  6. I love the poem and imagery. Sad, but not without hope. Good job!

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  7. Thank you. I write better from a darker place, I suppose. Yes, there is always HOPE! πŸ™‚

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  8. Lovely!!!
    My favorite line “……Intentions deferred…..” I really connected with that one. Thanks for sharing and thanks for stopping by. Come again.

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  9. So sad… how unfulfilling. Yet you end with hope. πŸ™‚

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